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Igen, nem ilyenre
De köszi, valóban elgondolkodtató, annyira nem is figyeltem, pedig egy honlapon olvastam. Talán akkor az elejét módosítom, hogy passive smoking is as dangerous as vagy nearly as dangerous as active smoking.A másik része ilyen szempontból mindegy, legalább lesz aki nem ért egyet és lehet eszmecserét folytatni, csak nyelvtanilag legyen jó minden
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Sziasztok!
Hibajavítást kérnék
The title of my talk is "Smoking in public places". I want to talk about this, because nowadays it is very important to live in a healthy way and to have a healthy lifestyle, however smokers in public places can cause harm to non-smoker people.
Let's start with some background information Smoking can cause a number of serious health problems and fatal disease. It is the biggest cause of cancer in the world. It has been noted that passive smoking is much more dangerous than active smoking, because in the former case, you inhale the smoke emitted out by a smoker.
So what is the solution to protect non-smoker people? Personally, I believe that the only way is to ban smoking from most of the public places and create a designated area in restaurants and pubs. It would be advantageous for both the smoker as well as the non smoker.
Firstly, smoking should be totally banned in places like hospitals, schools, trains, or bus stops.
Then, moving on to restaurants and pubs, the solution is a smoking zone, where a smoker can freely smoke without harming other people and the non smoker will be able to relax, without worrying about the stench, smoke or harmful side effects. A solution like this would give the smokers the right to smoke but also protect others from them.Finally, I would like to say that it is also important to decrease the number of smokers. How is it possible? Increasing the taxes of cigarettes would be a great idea. People would buy less of these unhealthy products which destroy the human body or moreover lots of people would give up smoking.
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Sziasztok!
Nyelvvizsga feladat felsőfokon, hogy 2-3 perc erejéig kérdéseket tegyek fel a partneremnek hogy "megismerjem". Bármi ötlet ezeken kívül?
-név, kor
-mit melózik
-mit szeret a munkájában
-hobbik
-hogy telt a nyár
-testvérek, gyerekek
-milyen zenét, filmet, sorozatot szeret
-mióta tanul angolt, mit tart könnyűnek és nehéznek a nyelvtanulásban -
Sziasztok!
Ezt a címet kaptam, 200 szó körüli esszét kell írnom."Despite setbacks, things tend to get better over time"
Egészen pontosan mit jelent ez, és milyen gondolatok jöhetnének ide, először is magyarul?
Az akadályok ellenére a dolgok jobbak lesznek/ jóvá fordulnak az idő múlásával?
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#9935
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#9935
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dave93
őstag
Hasaggymeg
#8935
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#8935
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Indulás előtt két perccel néztem be ide, mesteri időzítés köszönöm
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#8929
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#8929
üzenetére
Reggel 8kor le kell adnom áááá
Valami brutál hiba van benne akkor csak annyit 
Köszi -
Sziasztok!
Hibajavítást kérnék.Dear Knit-Wit,
I think you have to remind her that she offered money for the sweater. Say to her that you would like to buy a new shoes or you want to go out with your friends and now you need the money what she offered. Did you agree for a fix price? That's very important. Later what will you do if she would give you 1 pound? You have to learn this if you make a business. Another thing is that you shouldn't gave the sweater to the lady if she hasn't paid yet.
If you like knitting the idea of making sweaters if perfect. If you want to make money from this try to advertise on the internet or in news papers. Maybe you could have your own website with your unique collection of clothes on it. People could order from you through this site. This job as student would be much better than packing boxes all they just like all the other student jobs.Dear Christine,
My name is David, I am 17 years old and I am interested in the job. I have already worked as a babysitter in my hometown, Budapest, and I think I can get on well with children. I am planning to spend a year in England to improve my English, this job would be a fantastic opportunity for me. I would like to be informed about the salary and the available free time activities.Yours sincerely,
David Pollak
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Értem. Tanultam én elég sokat, csak a problémát abban látom hogy hiába seggeltünk be rengeteg szót, prepozíciót, kifejezést, 1 héten szépen ment is, de mivel később nem használtuk abszolút elfelejtődött. Nagyon nehezemre esik középfokról felfejlődni mert egy régebben megtanult, középszintű szókincsem van, azt használom. Ha próbálok kicsit feljebb lépni hibázok, mint azt most mondtad.
Egyébként had kérdezzem már meg, látom nem ma kezdted, mi a véleményed hogyan tudnék mondjuk egy nyár alatt erre felkészülni? Tanfolyamban nem igazán hiszek, esetleg magántanár? De az is hogyan? A seggeléssel az a problémám amit az előbb írtam, nem használom nem marad meg. Szóval mi a siker titka? -
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#8661
üzenetére
Köszi szépen!
Igen, érzem én is, pedig nyáron felsőfokra való felkészülés volna a cél, kicsit reménytelennek érzem jelenleg
Középfokot 1,5 éve csináltam.
"You could go around the world just taking photographs of different parts of the world or especially from animals."
Ezt úgy gondoltam, hogy körbejárhatná, körbeutazhatná a világot, fotózgatva különböző helyeket, akár állatok fotózására specializálódva. -
Sziasztok!
2007 májusi érettségi writting részének az írásbeli része, hibajavítást kérnék, előre is köszönömHi Jack,
Thank you very much for your invitation, I wouldn't miss a party like this! Can you tell me how to get there? Should I take the train or the bus? My friend is staying here too this week I was wondering if I could invite him too. Is there anything that I could help with the food? We will bake a cake tomorrow with my roommate maybe I will bring some to the party.Yours,
David
Dear Martha,
It's not easy to make a big decision like this at your age. As I have read your letter I had an idea. Why don't you go to a photographer school to be a professional photographer? You could go around the world just taking photographs of different parts of the world or especially from animals. Your photos could be in books and newspapers. If you like writing stories too maybe you could work for a magazine about animals and nature. It's really not a boring office job. You can earn a lot if your writings will be interesting and you could paste your own photos into the articles. Besides this the biggest advantage in this job that you would really enjoy it. However one disadvantage could be that you have to train hard, and compete with other journalist.
If I were you I wouldn't hesitate, this will be wonderful for your whole life.Yours,
David
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Sziasztok!
A 2007es októberi érettségi writting részét kaptam házinak, hibajavítást kérnék.
KösziHi, José
Thank you very much for your invitation, that's very kind of you. I'm so sorry but I already going out with my Polish friend on Saturday night. We are going to the cinema to see the new film with Bruce Willis. I bought the tickets yesterday, so I cannot miss it. How about going to a theater next week? I hope that's good for you.
Yours,
David
Dear Jane,
I think you should talk with the parents about the money. Maybe they would give you more than 10 pounds, if you ask them. Founding a good babysitter isn't easy these days, I'm sure they know it. However the money isn't the most important thing about a summer job. In my opinion it's definitely more important to enjoy what you do. Cutting the grass or packing boxes for all day long would be interesting for you? I don't think so. I have been doing that for two months but it was more than enough.
If I were you I would also think about the future. Later, you could write this job into your CV as a work experience. When you will trying to find a job it could be an advantage to have an experience looking after for children.
So in my opinion you should take the job. You could have a joyful job, a great experience and of course some money for the summer.Yours,
David
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Üdvözlet!
2006 Május 11 középszintű angol érettségi writting részét kaptam házi feladatul. Hibajavítást kérnékDear Dimitri,
Thank you very much for your invitation. I saw one of Andrew Lloyd Webber's musicals 2 years ago and it was fantastic, so I must see this famous musical too. I have a friend who saw this a week ago and she said that it was inredible enjoyable, maybe she will see it again. So how about meeting at Picadili Circus at 6:00 P.M.? I'm really looking forward to it.Yours,
David
Dear Desperate Teen,
I've read your problem in the Teen Advice Online internet forum. Your sister's behavior is very strange. I think you should talk with your sister about her reasons. Ask her why does she doing this and tell her about the the possible consequences. It's not a joke, she could get in a big trouble. Tell her that it too dangerous. She shouldn't takes the risk of being caught.
If I were you I would also talk with my parents. Tell them about your sister, they should really do something. Don't wait until one of them have to go to the police station for your sister. Ask for advise, but also say to them that you don't want to sneak you are just afraid of your sister's future. I hope your problem will be solved and your little sister will stop doing this.Yours,
David
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#8083
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#8083
üzenetére
Köszöntem, tisztelettel
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Sziasztok!
Hibajavítást kérnék Az első egy kutyasétáltatós melóra jelentkezős a másik pedig logikus I've read your message and I 'm interested in the job. My name is David, I'm 17 and I'm taking part in a language course this year in Greenford. May I have a few questions. What kind of dogs do you have? How long should the walk take? When should I exactly take them and when should I bring them back? How much would be the salary?
Yours,
David
Traffic chaos in town on 15 March
On that day the sky was absolutely dark in the morning. It was very unusual in the beginning of Spring. At 6.00 A.M. snow started falling. It was falling so heavily that after an hour all the roads were covered with snow. At 8:00 A.M. all the televisions and radios were talking about the incredible weather. The trains and the buses were 30-40 minutes late. Lots of people couldn't arrive to their workplace in time. However that was just the beginning. After a half hour driving was totally impossible. Bus and car drivers were just sitting in their vehicle. At 9:00 A.M. all the shops and schools closed. People wasn't able to travel to anywhere. After that, at about half past 9 rescue teams arrived to help people who were stuck in the snow.
At 10:00 A.M. the snowing suddenly stopped. In the afternoon the sun was shining so the snow disappeared in a few hours. The next day all the shops and schools opened, children were really dissatisfied, they liked the day without school and with lots of snow. -
Sziasztok!
Hibajavítást kérnék:Hi, Carla
I'm going to a concert with my classmate tonight. I will be back by 10:00 p.m. but there are two TV programmes that I really don't want to miss. First of all my favourite soup-opera, called Friends starts at 7:00 PM. Later, at 8:00 PM the film, called Fearless starts. I've been waiting for this film for a mounth. So please, can you record these for me? If you feel like, we can watch them tomorrow together.Thanks a lot,
David
Dear Peter,
I'm so happy that you are visiting Hungary! In my opinion one of the best places in the country is lake Balaton. It is one of the biggest lakes in Middle-Europe the water temperature is 24-25 degrees. From our house it's about 120-130km, on the motorway it takes about 1,5 hour. Lake Balaton is a very popular place in Hungary for Hungarians and foreign people too. If the weather is good you can have a swim, take a sunbath on the beach. Water sports are also popular such as windsurfing, sailing, fishing. You can rent a windsurf or a paddle boat. If the weather isn't good enough for these activites there are lots of little towns where you can have a trip. Tihany and Badacsony are very beautiful places or there is Siófok if you would like to have a party, go to a disco or buy something. It's called the capital town of lake Balaton.
I'm sure this place will be good and enjoyable for your whole family. If you have any questions please write to me.Yours,
David
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Hi all!
A feladatom az, hogy megmondjam mi a különbség az alábbi szavak között:
biography
autobiograpy
memoir
diary
Magyar fordításban ezeket találtam a felsorolt szavakhoz sorban: életrajz, önéletrajz, tanulmány, napló. Na most egyátalán magyarul hogy lehetne elmondani a különbséget? Az önéletrajzot magamról írom, az életrajz egy híres emberről szól és a többi? -
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Nagyon szépen köszönöm
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Sziasztok!
Hibajavítást kérnék illetve javaslatot, hogy a pitlibe tudom ezt befejezni? Illik a fogalmazás a címhez vagy eléggé elszúrtam?
KösziTravel broadens the minds
Getting out of the place where you live, visit other countries and get to know other cultures is absolutely broadens the minds. Tourism is a perfect way to meet different people, learn other habits and visit beautiful places. Most of the people think that tourism is good for everybody. However it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the positive side tourism has a vital contribution to the economy. In these hard days people must have holiday, should travel. It's fantastic when you stand in front of the thousands years old Colosseum in Rome, when you visit the Big Ben and the Tower Bridge in England or when you are sunbathing in the seaside of Greece. Visiting a place is not the same as read and learn about it, you must feel the atmosphere, take in different view point of the world. Travel on a double-decker in London, eat a spaghetti in Italy or have an English breakfast is a lifelong experience.
On the other hand it has lots of disadvantages. Famous and popular places like Venice or London is very crowded. The inhabitants have to live with the noise, the pollution and useless, expensive souvenir shops. Foreign visitors will become the owners of lots of houses, so there is no affordable housing left them to buy. Tourist may have their 5 star holiday in a poor country, while the locals are working hard to have their food and water.
In conclusion dispite of the disadvantages people should travel to know the world. Maybe by learn how people in poor countries work and live can be useful in our every day ideology. We always think that we have lots of big problems but do not think of other's whose problem is what to eat tomorrow morning or how to get a little water. People can't even imagine this, they should see it. Travelling can be also useful in some works. People should see how do foreign people working, should learn from them. For instance change two teacher's workplace for 1 year is an excellent way to learn about other systems. They can see what do they do wrong, what is good and bad about foreign systems. After that they can develop teaching in a Hungarian school. -
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Sziasztok!
Egy szövegről kellett véleményt írnom, hibajavítást kérnék
In my opinion the text was very interesting. I already knew that tourism has a negative side, however I guess that lots of people think tourism is good for everybody: People can have a rest, spend money, each country can develop and the tourists are happy. Now we can see it has lots of disadvantages too.
It must be really difficult for the locals, especially in Africa with water problems. It's hard to belive that people only care about themself, they don't mind the environment.
It's a shame that tourists want everything for their money and have relentless demands. What surprised me is that they aren't making the connection. It's a matter of course that they can take a shower in a hotel in the middle of Africa, and they can't see the local's effort to take a pot of water.
I wonder what can be done to solve these problems. Somebody must do something. -
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#7033
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Hála és köszönet
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Hi all!
2009es angol középszintű érettségit kaptam házinak, két levelet kellett írni, ezeket kérném javítani.
Köszi1.
Hi Sinead,Thank you very much for the advertisement, it sounds really good. A traditional restaurant like this will be great for us. Have you ever been to this restaurant? Could you tell me how to get there? What about the prices? Is there any website where I can find it out? Can you suggest any special dishes that I should try?
Yours,
David
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Hi Bobby,
There is nothing to worry about. I know that you were kind of popular in your last school, you can be popular here too, just try to make a good impression. Go to your class mates and greet them, try to join into the conversations. There will be lots of sport events and other school activites where you can make friends. Everybody will be interested about you and want to find out more about you, don’t worry. Just don’t give short answers, talk a lot. Don’t be agressive, stay patient. You know when I moved here I was in the same situation too, but everything was right.
Please write me a letter as soon as you canYours,
David
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Hi all!
Ezt kellene nekem lefordítanom magyarra:
[link]Van próbálkozás, de szerintem elég gyatra, a harmadik bekezdésben van egy olyan mondat amire semmit nem tudok írni. Javítgatást illetve jobb ötleteket várnék.
Köszönöm
Érintsen
A legtöbb múzeumban nagy táblák figyelmeztetnek arra, hogy „Ne érintse meg” és „kutyát behozni tilos.” Azonban a londoni Tate galériában egyetlen ilyen tábla sem volt hat hétig. Ebben a modern művészetek galériájában szoborkiállítás volt, speciálisan vak emberek számára.
Henry Moore a híres modern szobrász véleménye szerint az érintés nagyon jelentős. Ő segített a Tate-nek a kiállítás megszervezésében és kölcsönadta néhány munkáját kiállításra. A galéria kiválasztott 50 szobrot melyek kőből, fémből vagy fából készültek. Kisméretű illetve élet nagyságú figurák egyaránt voltak. Mindegyiknek érdekes alakja és különböző felszíne volt, a nagyon érdestől a nagyon finomig.
A galéria padlójára a bejárattól kezdve egy hosszú gumiszőnyeget helyeztek.
A vak látogatók könnyedén meg tudták találni az összes kiállított darabot akár egyedül akár kutyáik segítségével. A jegyszedők is beszéltek a szobrokról. Mindenkinek meg kellett mosnia és be kellett púdereznie a kezét a bejáratnál. A látogatok egész nagy része egészséges volt, akik először érezték a művek érintésének élményét. -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6932
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Nagyon szépen köszönöm mindenkinek, aki segített
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Elnézést ezért, de teljesen el voltam havazva, most volt egy kis időm átnézegettem, kicsit meg is lepődtem, de értem miért volt a My mother had booked a helyes, nagyon szépen köszönöm.
Folyamatosan beadandó fogalmazásokat, házi dolgozatokat kérnek, sajnos nem csak angolból most éppen mindenkire rájött a számonkérés.
Egy film megtekintése után review a házi, megcsináltam, de ha van valakinek kis ideje itt is javítást kérnék.Köszönöm szépen
The man without a face
The man without a face is a drama, starring and directed by Mel Gibson. It was release in 1993.
The film takes place in the USA, Maine in 1968. Justin McLeod, a former teacher has been living the life of a recluse since a car accident damaged the half of his face and killed one of his ex-students. We learn about a young boy, Chuck who needs a tutor to help him pass a military academy’s entrance exam. He finds McLeod who becomes his teacher and also a friendship develops between them.
Chuck meets him every day, however he keeps it in secret. When his mother learns that he has been visiting the man she and other people of the town think that McLeod must have been molesting him. After that Chuck learns the full story of the accident: McLeod was accused of molesting his ex-student.
As soon as their relationship is discovered, people ban McLeod from the town and he can’t have any contact with Chuck.
On his way he leaves a letter, wishing Chuck the best of luck.
In the finale we see Chuck who has succeeded and graduated. He recognizes his tutor in the background, the man without a face.
In my opinion the film is definitely worth seeing. It’s a film that shows everyday problems. We can learn about people’s bad approach. They are talking horrible things about a man who they don’t know. We can see the good and bad relationships in a family and we can learn about real friendships.
In conclusion I think it’s a film that everybody should see at least once. -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Köszi
Más: Azt akarom mondani hogy a gyilkos nem kaptam meg méltó büntetését így Clyde bosszút áll.
Kis szótárazás után:
The murderer doesn't get his desert so Clyde pays off. Jó ez így? -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6866
üzenetére
Nagyon szépen köszönöm! Igen tudom, fejleszteni kellene, próbálgatom, gyakorlat teszi a mestert
Egy kérdés: Az első javításnál miért "my mother had booked" miért nem simán booked? Ott van mellette a "6 months earlier" az időhatározó, akkor nem past simple? -
Hi all!
Az alábbi fogalmazásban kérnék hibajavítást. Sajnos elég sokszor kezdem úgy a mondatokat hogy we... Erre milyen más lehetőségem van?Köszi
My worst holiday
Two years ago I and my family wanted to go somewhere really hot and beautiful. My mother booked the holiday 6 months earlier so it was 10% cheaper. The picked country was Tunisia, with a 5 star hotel .We were looking forward to it until the big day came.
It was Friday and the weather was really awful. It rained heavily. We had to get up at 4 o’clock in the morning. We went to the airport by taxi.
The first problem was with the traveling. The plane was 2 hours late, which was the tiniest problem. It was quite old, my head and ears were aching during the flight.
We arrived at 11 o’clock. A little, dirty, crowded bus was waiting for us to take us to the hotel.
As soon as we arrived I was feeling happy. The hotel looked really beautiful and I though it will be great, I didn’t feel angry about the plane and the bus any more.
However as I entered I felt that terrible feeling again. It was dark and the people there didn’t seem very friendly. We asked for our room. It was in the third floor so we had to use the elevator. It was between the second and the third floor when it suddenly stopped. The little monitor didn’t show anything, the electricity just went out. There was no one to ask for help. It was horrible, although I think we were lucky. After a few minutes it worked, and we could escape.
The room was dark, the bathroom was smelly. My father immediately went down to the reception to make a complaint. We couldn’t go to another hotel but they gave another room which was a bit better.
The next day we went to the beach. The see was a little bit dirty, however the image of the whole seaside was beautiful. In the evening we ate at the hotel’s restaurant. There were a big selection but it was awful. It was really hard and it took a long time to choose a meal.
On Monday I woke up at about 5 o’clock with a terrible stomachache. From this time I felt really bad, and I vomited a lot. After that day my mother called a doctor who gave me an injection. I felt better after that. I didn’t mind the hotel, the sickness, I just wanted to relax a bit and enjoy the sea in the last few days.
At the way home the bus was crowded again the plane was late although just one hour. At Hungary one of our luggages were lost, we couldn’t believe that.
We needed an extra one week to have a rest and try to forget this holiday.
To say something positive I must tell that after a week the phone rang suddenly because the luggage was found. This is a holiday what I won’t forget until I live. It was really awful but now I can laugh about it. Maybe I will have a worse holiday as an adult, who knows? -
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Hasaggymeg
#6717
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6717
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Hát voltál már biztatóbb is, de köszi
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#6714
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6714
üzenetére
Köszi, persze, tudom de most hangsúlyozták hogy csak CV kell, covering letter gondolom majd pár nappal később.
Szóval maga a CV rendben van, az előírásoknak megfelel? -
Hi all!
Az a házi feladatom, hogy a neten keressek egy álláshirdetést, és írjak hozzá egy olyan CV-t, ami megfelel az állás követelményeihez. Itt a hirdetés: [link]
Itt a CV: [link]Most csinálok ilyet először mi jó, mi rossz, egyátalán megfelel a hirdetésnek
Nem szeretem az ilyen feladatokat, pedig nagyon hasznos lehet 
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6695
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Köszi szépen mindenkinek
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Hi all!
Az alábbi hirdetésre kell írnom egy "letter of applicationt"
Trans-globe tours
Tour Guides
We are looking for enthusiastic , hard working, friendly people who
-have good interpersonal skills
-speak two or more languages fluently
-have a genuine interest in other countries and cultures
-want to see the world.Please apply with CV to:
Martin Ruane, stb. (cím)Próbálkozásom
Dear Martin Ruane,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in today's Guardian for a tour guide.
As you will see from the enclosed CV, I can speak English and German fluently.
I was always interested in history and in other countries and cultures.
Travelling is my hobbi, I have visited nearly 10 countries in my life, but I really want to visit more.
While I was abroad I had to use my English and German, which was a great language practise.
I job like this would be my dream come true. (Van egy olyan sejtésem, hogy ez egy nyelvtani epic fail... )I could be available for an interview at anytime.
Hope I may be of interest to you.Yours sincerely,
David Pollak
Ennyi lenne. A végére nem tudom, esetleg cseréljem ki az utolsó mondatot arra, hogy I look forward to hearing from you soon?
Köszi
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#6584
dave93
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(Darkwood)
#6583
válasz
(Darkwood)
#6583
üzenetére
Mi úgy tanultuk, hogy a must-nak van egy olyan jelentése, hogy bizonyára. Pl: Peter must be ill. Péter bizonyára beteg.
Ennek a múlt ideje a must have+ 3dik alak. Jelen esetben Peter must have been ill, Péter bizonyára beteg volt.
A sima must a belső kényszeres muszáj, Pl I must visit my grandmother today. Belülről jön a késztetés, hogy azért már tényleg meg kell látogatni a nagymamát.
A have to külső kényszeres kell. Pl I have to write the homework. Muszáj, mert a tanár kényszerít rá.
Én így tanultam, remélem segítettem valamit -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6580
üzenetére
Nagyon szépen köszönöm
Milyen fogalmazási hiányosságokra gondolsz jelen esetben? Fejleszteni szeretném amikor csak lehet -
Köszi szépen Neked is, még nem de közben újabb és újabb feladatok
Ismét hibajavítást, további ötleteket várnék az alábbi fogalmazásba:Getting Older
Students usually don’t want to learn, they always say “I want to be an adult”. The adult’s answer is: “Don’t want to be an adult. You will have more difficult life”.
We can’t say that there is a right answer. Getting older has advantages but also some disadvantages.First of all by getting older we will have more life experience. We learn from our mistakes, become philosopher. As adults we can get married, have a family with children. We will earn money, don’t have to ask our parents if we want to buy something we can have an independent life. Younger people will ask us for advise.
Later as pensioners we don’t have to do anything. We can be with our grandchildren, shopping all day or cook all day. We can travel if we have money.Of course for every plus there is a minus. By getting older we will have more subjects, have to learn more, studying will be more difficult: Lots of exams, stress. We won’t have much time to do what we want. After finishing school we have to go to work to earn some money. We will have lots of problems for instance paying all the bills on time. We will become more forgetful our sight and hearing become worth. We feel pain all the time, we can’t do exercises what we was able to do before. Later simple things like going to the toilet will be difficult and we won’t be able to do that without help.
In conclusion getting older has many advantages and disadvantages, but in my opinion we have to get older, to live a full life and discover all the happiness of each life period.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#6574
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6574
üzenetére
Köszi szépen
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Hi all!
Először is: @ whited: Hidd el neked is csak a hasznodra válik ha legalább megpróbálod. Lehet, hogy nagy baromságokat írsz, de legalább gondolkodtál, megpróbáltad. A topic pedig azért van, hogy kijavítsuk a hibákat, segítsünk egymásnak. Ha nem jó amit írsz, ki lesz javítva és legközelebb menni fog. Aztán: Érvelő fogalmazást kell írnom, pontosabban majd szóban kell róla beszélnem, de muszáj leírnom, különben nem fog menni. A cím: Buying things via Internet is risky.
Próbálkoztam, túl sok ilyen fogalmazást még nem csináltam, biztos van benne egy csomó hiba, meg mintha kicsit a pozitív oldalra több került volna mint a negatívra, de hát én ajánlom a netes vásárlást, mit csináljak Várom a javaslatokat, kiegészítéseket, javításokat.
KöszönömBuying things via Internet is risky.
There are lots of people who don’t buy anything online because they are afraid of losing their money. However there are lots of people too who buy nearly everything online. It has many advantages but also some disadvantages.
First of all in my opinion the most important advantage is that things usually much cheaper on the Internet. Secondly it’s much more comfortable: You don’t have to go out of your flat. You can pay online with your credit card then your order will be delivered to your home. Moreover there is more information about a product in a webshop. Finally there is a wider selection on the Internet. If you want to be careful, you can read other buyers experiences about a webshop in forums. On big websites for instance Ebay or Vatera every seller and buyer have to leave a feedback about the business. This can help other, new buyers to see if the seller is correct.
Of course for every there is a minus. One disadvantage is that you can’t touch, can’t try and can’t see the product. Another point is that you usually have to pay first and then the seller will send you your order. To pay, you have to use your credit card and If you aren’t careful cheaters can steel your money. You can also get products which aren’t working. It also can be a disadvantage that nowdays people don’t take the trouble to go shopping they are just sitting at home in front of their computers.
In conclusion I think buying things on the Internet can be risky, but If you are careful you can save a lot of time and money.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Köszi mindenkinek, a helyes megoldás az I insisted on the students baking cakes for Xmas.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6546
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válasz
MmDorian
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Headway Third Edition Intermediate. Why?
Más:
Éppen a Gerund a téma ismét, 10 mondatfordítást kaptam, javítást kérnék
1. Megbírságoltak amiért nem parkoltam jó helyen
I was fined for parking in a bad place.
2. Lopással gyanúsították
He was suspected of steeling
3. Alig várom, hogy találkozzunk
I look forward to seeing you again.
4. Gondom lesz rá, hogy megírjátok a házi feladatot
I will have (??) see about writting the homework
5. Vállalta a kockázatát annak, hogy elkapják
He took the risk of being catched
6. Annak ellenére, hogy megírtam a házit egyest kaptam
Dispate of writting my homework I got a one.
7. Vitatkozás helyett írd meg a mondatokat.
Instead of arguing write the sentences.
8.Ragaszkodtam ahhoz, hogy sütit süssenek a diákok Karácsonyra
I insisted the students on baking cakes for Chrsitmas.
9. Hozzá vagyok szokva a korán keléshez.
I get used to getting up early
10. Szégyenkezett amiért puskázott
He was ashamed of cheating.Köszi
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Hi all! Adott egy levél amire válaszolnom kell. Mindenek előtt maga a levél:
Dear Anne Westcombe,I would like to reserve two rooms at your bed and breakfast. We are arriving on 27th Aug.
We hope to stay for six nights, departing 2 Sept. My husband and I would like a double room with an en-suite bathroom. I would also like to reserve a room for our two teenage daughters. Both rooms should be non smoking. Would it be possible to have rooms facing the sea? Do you have available rooms for these dates? Could you also tell me the price of each room?
I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,
Janet CooperNa és akkor a feladat:
Write a reply. Include the following information:
-Thank her for her enquiry.
-Say you are pleased to confirm her reservation for the rooms and for the dates.
- Tell her that all the rooms come with en-suite bathroom and a sea view.
-Each room is Ł50 per night.
- end the letter saying that you look forward to welcoming her and her family to the B&B.
-finish with yours sincerely.Na most ez mind benne van, de iszonyat rövid és ezeken kívül kb semmit nem tudok belerakni
Mivel tudnám bővíteni?Dear Janet Cooper,
Thank you very much for your enquiry. I’m very pleased to confirm your reservation for the rooms and the dates.
First of all I would like to tell you that all our rooms come with en-suite bathroom and a beautiful view for the sea.
We have availbe rooms for these dates, each room is Ł50 per night.
We look forward to welcoming you and your family.Yours sincerely, Anne Westcombe.
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Thx all, a fogalmazást jövőhét szerdán olvasom fel, addig is van itt néhány mondat amit le kellene fordítanom, de nem mind megy, vagy megy, de ellenőrzést kérnék
1. Tilos kutyát hozni ebbe a parkba
People are not allowed to walk with dog here? vagy people mustn't?
2.Bizonyára jó buli volt
It must have been a good party
3. Minden nap kellett volna gyógyszert bevenned
You should have taken medicine every day.
4. Elutaztam volna Sopronba
I would have traveled to Sopron.
5. Tudtam volna adni neked zsebkendőt
I could have given you a tissue.
11. Akár elmehetnénk moziba is.
We could go to the cinema? vagy hogyan fejezzem ki azt hogy akár?Köszi
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Sziasztok!
A Szabadság Szerelem című filmről kell egy összefoglalót, bemutatót írnom. Kérlek benneteket javítsátok ki a hibákat illetve ha úgy gondoljátok magából a történetből hiányzik valami szóljatok Egy Amerikai tanárnak kell felolvasnom aki biztosan nem látta és fogalma sincs miről van szó. Na most aki látta a filmet annak így biztos kerek lesz, de milyen bevezető mondatokat írjak még hogy érthető legyen? Mert szvsz kicsit fura, hogy leírom hogy a forradalomról szól aztán egyből a vízilabda csapat, lehet így nagyokat nézne
KösziChildren of Glory
The Children of Glory is a Hungarian drama film directed by Christina Goda and starring Iván Fenyő and Cate Dobó.
The film is about the revolution in 1956. The Hungarian waterpolo team is the best in the world, only the Russian team could beat them in 1955. They all want to win the 1956 Olympic Games in Melbourne. Suddenly a revolution break out in Budapest. Charlie the star of the Hungarian waterpolo team meet Victoria a confident undergraduate (itt azt akarom mondani hogy egyetemista, jó így?) girl . They help each other, try to fight with the others for a better living and an independent country. Charlie thinks that the revolution is the most important thing this time, so he makes a decision and leave the waterpolo team. At the end of October the Russians start to leave the country, the Hungarians are very happy, they think they win. Victoria wants Charlie to travel with his team to Melbourne and win the Olympic Games, because the revolotion ended. While they are traveling to Melbourne they see lots of Russian tanks and soldiers going to Budapest. This was just a ramp, the revolution didn’t ended. Charlie knows they going to shoot down everything and kill a lot of people but he can’t do anything. The only thing he can do is to win the Olympic Games to show the world that the Russians can’t do everything with Hungary. They win lots of matches and at the and they play a runoff (itt a döntőre gondolok) with the Russian waterpolo team. This is not just a match, now they can beat the Russians and give some power to the Hungarian people who are fighting in Budapest. There are lots of fouls but the Hungarian team can win.
At Budapest lots of people die but they fight as long as they can. The Russians catch Victoria. They want her to tell the names of the Hungarian people who fought to kill them. Victoria doesn’t say anything so after a few days they kill her. She dies for his home, for Hungary, for the independence. -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Mondd hogy ez neked is nyelvtanulás
Még van egy amiről fingom nincs: Lehetetlen hogy tovább maradjunk -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#6434
üzenetére
Köszi szépen! Látom közben fanatikus taggá váltál grat
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Hi all!
Segédigékkel kellene kifejeznem a következő mondatokat. Nem nagyon értem sajna
1. Bizonyára sokat ittál ezért vagy másnapos.
You must drink too much that's why you are hangover.
2. Bizonyára nagyon hideg volt
It must has been very cold.
3. Biztos nem tanultál eleget ezért buktál meg a vizsgán
Erre ötletem sincs
4. Bizonyára nagy volt a forgalom ezért késtél
The traffic must has been big, that's why you are late.
6. Lehetetlen hogy nem voltál itt a múlt héten
7. Bizonyára az anyukám hívott
8. Lehetetlen hogy az anyukám hívottNa ezekre öteletem sincs, amit írtam valószínű rossz. Tudna valaki segíteni? Előre is köszi
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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üzenetére
Köszi, már beadtam, most már mindegy
Más: A focit kellene egyszerűen elmagyarázni. Kerestem neten, de elég bonyolult megfogalmazásokat találtam. Kiegészítéseket kérnék ehhez:
In football there are two teams. In each team there are 11 players. The game is played on a football field which is 100-yard-long. The players have to score the ball into the other team's goal (? Itt a kapura gondolok) The team which score more goal win. The players mustn't use their hands only their legs and sometimes their head. The only player who can touch the ball with him/her hands is the goalkeaper.
Mit írjak még? Hogy van az hogy hátvéd, csatár, középpályás? Ezeket még beleírnám, még mit? -
Hi!
Olyan feladatot kaptam, hogy van egy történet tő mondatokkal. Ezt ki kell "színesíteni" melléknevekkel, további mondatokkal, hogy izgalmasabb legyen a mese. Tehát például ez volt az első alapmondat: "There was once an empreror who lived in a palace" Ebből ezt csináltam: "There was one an old empreror who lived in an enormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong"Megírtam a történetet, esetleges javítást kérnék, valószínűleg az igeidőkkel lesz néhány probléma. Ha esetleg mégjobban lehetne színesíteni akkor további gondolatokat is várnék. Előre is nagyon köszönöm
There was one an old empreror who lived in an enormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong. He had three beautiful daughters but unfortunately no sons. His only wish was that he wanted his daughters to marry before he die. He started to search for the best princes. After a long time he thought he had found the best three. On the next day the three daughters and the prices met. The gentleman were impresed by the beautiful girls, however the daughters didn't like them. They didn't know what to do. They knew that If they refused the marrige the emperor going to became very angry, but they didn't want to spend their whole life with a man who they don't like. So they made the dicission: They refused to mary the princes, and the empreror became very angry. He couldn't belive that. He said they must get married when they were sixteen years old.The girls was very upset. They made a plan, to getaway. When the empreror fall asleep they ran away. Couple of days later the girls found a work on a farm. Their job was really hard, working all day on the sun, but they didn't mind it. One day the farmer's sons came to visit their father. They were three handsome man. The girls really loved them and fell in love. They married the sons as soon as they were sixsteen. The empreror was very happy and his daughters lived happily ever after.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Sziasztok!
Nyelvtani javítást kérnék. Köszönöm
My name is David. I'm 17 years old. I have a brother who is 13 years old. I have been learning English for 9 years and I started to learn German 1 year ago. My favourite subjects are Geography and History. I Don't like Maths, Chemistry and Phisics. In my free time I often repair computers, because I'm interested in Information Technology. I like riding my bike and my scooter. If I have time sometimes I go to swim.Amolyan bemutatkozó kis szöveg lenne új tanárnak aki egy mukkot sem beszél magyarul, Amerikai.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#5952
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#5952
üzenetére
Köszi szépen, igen az mindig problémám. A present simple-nél meg mindig elfelejtem azt az S betűt, pedig kevés ilyen egyszerű szabály van... Nyáron, vagy jövőre középfokú nyelvvizsga jó lenne, gyakorolnom kell.
Köszi mégegyszer -
Sziasztok!
Angol fogalmazást kell írnom, a téma egy könyv bemutatása, de tudjátok ilyen sablon szerűen mint egy levélírásnál hogy meg van szabva mivel kell kezdeni, hova kell a dátumot, stb. (Utálom
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Szóval ezt sikerült összedobnom, kérek valakit nézze át hátha talál benne hibát, főleg igeidőkkel lehet probléma. Ha valaki esetleg azt is tudja hogyan kell felépülnie egy ilyen fogalmazásnak kérem azt is ellenőrizze jó-e a felépítés, mi hiányzik?
The Picture of Dorian Gray
The Picture of Dorian Gray is the only published novel written by Oscar Wilde. He created it in 1890.
Wilde later revised this edition, making several alterations, and adding new chapters.
From the day it was published it became very popular and also notorious. It was a great success and a scorn too.
The story is often called The Portrait of Dorian Gray.The novel tells of a young man called Dorian Gray, the subject of a painting by artist Basil Hallward.
Basil is impressed by Dorian's beauty is responsible for a new mode in his art. Talking in Basil's garden, Dorian meets Lord Henry Wotton, a friend of Basil's. He wants to buy the portrait, but Dorian doesn’t want to sell it. Lord Henry often visit him, they like spending time together. Dorian sell his soil to the picture. Several years ago Dorian become a bad guy, he do strange things. He realize, that while his body is beautiful, the painting became uglier and uglier. His bad actions are on the portrait.
He murder somebody, he wants to kill the painting, so he throw a big knife into the picture. Dorian fells down and die. He has killed himself. His servant find him with a crinkled, ugly face.I like the book I can advise to everybody. It’s a very interesting and exciting creation.
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Hi all!
Passzívot tanulom, pontosabban passzívba alakítani aktívból illetve passzívból alakítani vissza aktívba.
Pl: We have built this house. This house has benn built by us.
All the windows have been cleaned. I have cleaned all the windows.
Ezt teljesen értem, de hogyan kell hogy ha kérdő mondat van? Ez az egy amit nem tudok megcsinálni. Hogyan kell ezt a mondatot passzívba alakítani?
Do you drink milk?
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Hi all!
Angol fogalmazást kell írnom, kérlek benneteket ellenőrizzétek le és ha pár helyen jobb ötletetek lenne írjátok meg! Van benne szóismétlés amit valahogyan ki kellene javítani illetve kérdés nyelvtanilag helyes-e? Töltelék szavak jöhetnek még bele! Előre is köszi!Travelling by plane
However travelling by plane has many advantages. First of all It’s very fast and comfortable. There are no stressful traffic jams, so It’s usually on time. It’s also safely. In fact most of the people think that travelling by plane is dangerous, but more people die in car accidents. You can use the time in different ways-For instans you can read, work or just relax. Sometimes you can watch TV. In 10-11km high you can watch the beautiful view.
On the other hand, travelling by plane has also some disadvantages.. The biggest problem is that it’s expensive. You must also pay for a taxi or a bus, because travelling by plane isn’t door to door, you must go to the airport. Because of safe reasons you must by ont he airport 2 hours before the flying. There are much people wo are afraid of flying. And more over, the plane is polluting the environment.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#5754
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#5754
üzenetére
köszi
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Sziasztok!
Levelet, pontosabban képeslapot kell írnom, mintha éppen nyaralnék. Kérlek titeket javítsátok ki a hibákat. Előre is köszönömDear John,
Here we are in Hurghada having a nice time.
The weather is very hot, there aren’t any clouds on the sky.
We’re staying in a beautiful hotel, and we’re having a wonderful views of the seaside.
The water is good, It’s about 28C.We take a swim in every hour.
Yesterday we went to see the Piramids and the Szphinx. It was very exciting.
they are in luxor about 6 hours from the seaside.the buses with the touristics go in convoy.many guardian came after the busses.it was a gripping story.
Today we’re going to shop for suvenirs. I’ll buy a present for you.. Did you have a nice time in Mexico? I’m sure you were enjoying it.
See you soon
David and his family
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
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Thanks !
Végül a perch volt a nyerő -
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
#5742
válasz
Hasaggymeg
#5742
üzenetére
Köszönöm szépen
A többit meg tudtam csinálni, de azért le tudnád nekem ellenőrizni?
1. 2 hete nem láttalak: I haven't seen you since 2 weeks
2. Mikor csináltad meg a házid? When did you do your homework?
3. Mennyi ideje van meg ez a könyved? How long have you had this book?
4. nem ettem shusit mostanában. I haven't eaten shusi nowdays.
5. Eddig 3 vizsgán buktam meg. I have failed 3 exams so far.
6. Tegnap fogtam egy harcsát és egy süllőt. I caught a catfish and a (süllőt nem tudom) yesterday.
7. Még nem írtuk meg a dolgozatot. We haven't written the test jet.
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#5635
üzenetére
köszönöm
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dave93
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Hasaggymeg
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válasz
Hasaggymeg
#5633
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Nagyon köszönöm!
Ez nagyon furán hangzik, tényleg így kell? 
We would have liked -
Hi!
Kisebb fogalmazást kell írnom egy utazásról. Megkérnék valakit hogy nézze át, van-e benne helyesírási hiba és egyátalán értelmes-e? Köszönöm
We were in Egyipt at summer in 2007. We flew to Hurghada, because we love hot weather. Our family stayed in a nice and big Hotel near the seaside.
We stayed at the seaside all day. Near the hotel, there was a big big pool. so we could swim there.
We would liked to visit the famous Piramids in Kairo, but unfortunately I was sick that time. That’s why we couldn’t go to Kairo neither Luxor.
The Hotel accommodations was very good The meal-time was all inclusive, so you could eat wahtever you wanted.
The weather was excellent , there weren’t any clouds int he sky. I could recommend this country to everyone, because the people are friendly and the sea is amazing.
De köszi, valóban elgondolkodtató, annyira nem is figyeltem, pedig egy honlapon olvastam. Talán akkor az elejét módosítom, hogy passive smoking is as dangerous as vagy nearly as dangerous as active smoking.
Majd Hasaggymeg mester kijavít akkor, köszönöm mindkettőtöknek 
Középfokot 1,5 éve csináltam.
Thanks boys! 
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